A boy fights for survival during the 872 day siege of Leningrad.

I rewrote it. You can read if you view my profile.

Brevity and simplicity are the essence of a good logline, unlike most writers you've certainly employed both in this first logline draft. Now pick and choose the specific detail, asked for in the above comments, that will make this a compelling story and subsequently a strong concept.

There is a movie with Gabriel Byrne set during this event. ?It is about a female journo trying to save two children from starvation. ?This what we need here. A goal stated or some background.