'While the rest of the world begins to lose their memories. A sole teenager starts to learn things about the world that they had never dreamed of.'

Memories

6 reviews

Valentin Samurai · 2,423 pts

The original premise look eerily similar to the novel "The Giver" that is being made into a movie with Jeff Bridges.
For those who have not read the book (or who might), Here is the imdb URL: http://www.imdb.com/title/tt0435651/?ref_=fn_al_tt_1
Talking about somebody thinking that they live in an ideal world but suddenly discover that they live in a dystopian reality, Personally, I would like somebody to write a story/screenplay set in the "Firefly" environment. A script describing what happen on the planet Miranda where the reavers were created from the perspective of a somebody not affected by the air supply additive.

Legend_of Penpusher · 35 pts

(almost a year later, but maybe it's still a work-in-progress?)

"A world they never dreamed of."
Who's they? If it's the protag, use he or she.

I'd also love a touch more specifics, to paint more of a picture in my head.

Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

I like the premise, what happens to the teenager or the world because there is one person that remembers?