Legend_of

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on In Portland, Oregon there is a house which for the last 130 years has served to maintain the link between two worlds: ours, and the world of The Wondrous. In this immersive, real-world adventure, six players will decide if Wonder is something worth saving.

Thanks for the help thus far. I'm posting here because I'm submitting my project for a story workshop.?The project is?a real-world adventure where groups of six? palyers interact with actors and puzzles inside a big house, and I need a…
on An Elizabethan do-gooder is framed for his father's murder and takes refuge with the most notorious thieves in England. When their leader is captured, he must choose: join them and return to the scene of the crime, or run away and remain an outlaw.

Wonderful insights all around, guys. This is something I do wonder. Are the terms "Elizabethan" and "Highwayman" too foreign. If It is "In 1590 England..." will it automatically switch off people's interest because it sounds too much like a history?…
on 'While the rest of the world begins to lose their memories. A sole teenager starts to learn things about the world that they had never dreamed of.'

(almost a year later, but maybe it's still a work-in-progress?) "A world they never dreamed of." Who's they? If it's the protag, use he or she. I'd also love a touch more specifics, to paint more of a picture in…