When Nonna has a stroke, Angela has to decide if her life-long quest to settle the feud between Nonna and her sister is worth continuing.

Maria, aka Nonna, has raised Angela and her older sister, Lisa, since their parents died when they were children. The feud begins when Lisa gets pregnant at 19 and Nonna kicks her out of the house. Years later, the feud rages on while Angela tries to end it. When Nonna has a massive stroke, will Lisa finally give in so that everyone can move on?

11 reviews

it52 0 pts

I def understand. I do agree that it could work if it was written well. I guess it depends.

Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

Should not mention names in logline just mention sisters.

Two long feuding sisters must decide whether to continue the feud
after one has a stroke.

Former member

Should not mention names in logline just mention sisters.

Two long feuding sisters must decide whether to continue the feud
after one has a stroke.

writerobrien 0 pts

It would be interesting to read/watch if it was written well. My goal is a good story, not necessarily whether it's "high concept" or not. With that said, I do appreciate your feedback. If you don't think it's interesting enough, it may not be. Thanks!