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on Devon Howard has built the best police force in the history of New York City. Now they’re turning on him. Will Howard win the war on crime and lose the troops?

I see what everyone else is saying here, but it definitely intrigues me. I would, however, prefer to know the function of the main character.
on When Nonna has a stroke, Angela has to decide if her life-long quest to settle the feud between Nonna and her sister is worth continuing.

Thank you, everyone!
on When Nonna has a stroke, Angela has to decide if her life-long quest to settle the feud between Nonna and her sister is worth continuing.

It would be interesting to read/watch if it was written well. My goal is a good story, not necessarily whether it's "high concept" or not. With that said, I do appreciate your feedback. If you don't think it's interesting enough,…
on When left for dead by his former gang, a reformed outlaw seeks to avenge the murder of his family after an Indian mystic "gifts" him eternal life.

This sounds intriguing. I would not like to see a lot of blood and guts with a lack of story, though. I'm also curious if he eventually returns to normal and dies. If he remains immortal, this would make for…