When his 7-year-old son drops the c-bomb in class, Jack, a kind hearted but foul mouthed family man, is given an ultimatum by his wife, sex or swearing.

Swear Bear

9 reviews

Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

Sounds like a funny idea. What if the Dad had some form of Tourettes that he's been concealing by pretending to be some regular Joe all this time?

Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

Agreed. Perhaps you could make the dad a notoriously foul-mouthed stand-up comic who makes his living on the F-Word. He'd have a lot to lose.

jjb 0 pts

That's a fair point, patrockable, however, the character I'm trying to create can't simply do that. But if I can't get that across in the logline, then I have issues.