When fake TV survival expert Rock Cartwright is challenged to a winner takes all survival-off by his younger, better rival, he finds himself in a race against time to get out of the Californian wilderness and back to Los Angeles.

Rock Cartwright: Survival Expert

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dpg Singularity · 112,231 pts

And "he finds himself" is weak. He MUST race against time. But for what? What are the stakes?

brenkilco 0 pts

How exactly is the protagonist a fake? Is he just someone who reads off a teleprompter or is he an armchair expert who has never been in the wild? If he knows nothing then the younger man is not just a rival. He's the only survival expert in the story. So if the contest is to get dropped into the wilderness and find a way back to LA, which I'm assuming, the younger man is clearly going to win unless...Well, unless something. And that something is your story and should be in your logline