brenkilco
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on Strife
Presumably its the mob's suitcase and there is something extremely valuable or compromising inside. Think you should clarify. Also why the oath? Sounds more like a samurai psychopath than a mob enforcer. Think you need a bit more about who… -
Thanks, Tor Dollhouse. Nice and concise, though I hate to lose the locked room aspect of the thing, the fact that the diplomat disappears or seems to disappear from the moving train. Richiev, the statesman is a pure macguffin and…
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Is the resemblance of the "doppelganger" to the dead partner merely coincidental or is she facing a challenge in her dimension similar to the one that caused the death of the partner? Is this a real second chance for the…
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How exactly is the protagonist a fake? Is he just someone who reads off a teleprompter or is he an armchair expert who has never been in the wild? If he knows nothing then the younger man is not just…