When Alice finally realizes her students are all idiots and her co-workers are losers, she decidest to get together with Amanda and Megan for some after school drinks.

Educated

3 reviews

Musegetes 0 pts

Is this for a short film? You have perhaps 3 minutes of material here, 5 if you stretch it. Not very gripping or interesting as subject matter, even for a short.

Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts

There is not story here. you are describing a scene and a little bit of set up to the scene.