Cadence, a twenty-something deadbeat, devises a scheme to steal doughnuts from a local bakery, to regain her ex-boyfriend's affection.

Thanks for the input! I wrote the screenplay already and it is a full feature length script. I'll rework the logline and post it here.

No need to mention protag's name, unless famous (nice name...probably goose-steps when she walks, though...)

You have to explain why stealing doughnuts will regain his affection; is it just because he likes doughnuts? It's cute, but I can't see it as anything more than a short.

Geno Scala (sharkeatingman)- judge