When a young but tough stranger arrives in an isolated community, the naive queen must protect him from the suspicious villagers. But has she made the right decision?

by Himiona Penpusher · 71 pts 193 views

2 reviews

Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts

Your logline seems to switch perspectives. It starts with the strangers PoV, then it switches to the queen PoV.
It is better to have the same PoV throughout the logline.