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I honestly think it sounds good. Sorry I don't have more to say but I'm a true believer in less is more.

This is a little shorter but I believe still works.

"When a repressed writer is revived after dying, he must stop his disembodied soul inflicting the dark fantasies from his novels on the woman he loves"

Soulless is a good title, you could also call the movie "Id" as well.

Yeah, I can see that it would work great as a comedy, but other than writing characters for comic relief in more serious fiction, I've never attempted a full-on comedy genre piece.