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Chris, an architectural intern falls for a mysterious woman named Samantha, but she seems to know a lot about him, maybe too much. Is he just overthinking or is there more to Samantha than meets the eye?

May 28, 2014

on Dwayne Townsend, a local rapper/producer struggles to find his way through a neighborhood infested with drugs and temptation, but after his friend is fatally shot and he changes his life, he?s forced back into his old life and has to decide, take a life or save one.

I'm being told less is not more so disregard my prev comment lol #writeon
on you

I honestly think it sounds good. Sorry I don't have more to say but I'm a true believer in less is more.
on Dwayne Townsend, a local rapper/producer struggles to find his way through a neighborhood infested with drugs and temptation, but after his friend is fatally shot and he changes his life, he?s forced back into his old life and has to decide, take a life or save one.

I commend you on writing for starters. I like the logline but I'm trying to figure out how you can say more by saying less that's what I've learned. Maybe you should read through it another 100 times as I'm…