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This feels like acTV series not a movie. A movie can be done once, a TV show is s universe. His struggle to come to grips with single life isn?t a single goal.
Agreed with Richiev.
Also, I can not tell you how often we get writers trying to push "...coming to terms with..." as the MC's action in a story. This is one of the most overused and ineffective ways to describe the action your MC will take - it's all internal and therefore will not make for good visuals, not to mention, it mostly relates to the inner journey of a character not the pursuit of an external goal.
Yeah, they are trapped together I feel like they almost need to pretend to still be a couple during this period.
Anyways, you have a setup and but not much after that.
When when he is offered a publishing deal for his guide to a successful marriage book, a struggling writer must convinces his ex to pretend to be his wife for a year while he finishes and publishes his book.