Trapped into a lease with his ex-wife, a young writer must come to terms with single life, all whilst making plans for his future.

4 reviews

CraigDGriffiths Singularity · 20,463 pts

This feels like acTV series not a movie. A movie can be done once, a TV show is s universe. His struggle to come to grips with single life isn?t a single goal.

Neer Shelter Singularity · 55,464 pts

Agreed with Richiev.

Also, I can not tell you how often we get writers trying to push "...coming to terms with..." as the MC's action in a story. This is one of the most overused and ineffective ways to describe the action your MC will take - it's all internal and therefore will not make for good visuals, not to mention, it mostly relates to the inner journey of a character not the pursuit of an external goal.

Knightrider Mentor · 5,041 pts

Yeah, they are trapped together I feel like they almost need to pretend to still be a couple during this period.

Anyways, you have a setup and but not much after that.

When when he is offered a publishing deal for his guide to a successful marriage book, a struggling writer must convinces his ex to pretend to be his wife for a year while he finishes and publishes his book.