Trapped in a simulated loop of Earth’s final year before war ravaged the world, a increasingly pessimistic time traveller-to-be must test an increasingly severe sequence of events before going back in time to save the planet for real.

by Knightrider Mentor · 5,041 pts 749 views

How Far Are You Willing To Go.

5 reviews

Valentin Samurai · 2,423 pts

Having travelled to the future and seen the end of humanity, a misanthropic scientist has one year to change events that lead to world war 3.

misanthropic seem to be a better and shorter description than increasingly pessimistic.
the fact he is in simulated loop is just an artefact of the plot, so I left it out of the Logline.

The original Logline lead me to more questions:
is he really trapped in the simulation?
if it is the loop what is the time constraint?
what and who is the antagonist?

dpg Singularity · 112,231 pts

>>>back in time

Back how far?

Steve72 Penpusher · 151 pts

Trapped in a simulated loop of Earth?s final year, a scientist must relive an increasingly strange sequence of events before trying to change history.

Steve72 Penpusher · 151 pts

get rid of the words "to be" they break the flow

variable Summitry · 18,541 pts

Why must HE care? how does it personally matters to him?
Why NOW? It seems to lack an Inciting Incident

Also, if it's a loop, then the clock isn't ticking right?
because If they fail to train themselves (i am guessing) "the final year" will start again..