Trapped in a high rise residential building a group of neighbors must learn to work together to escape their culprit.

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Neer Shelter Singularity · 55,464 pts

Agreed with SouthWestSusie.

What is the big obstacles for them to overcome?
Also, there have been many 'trapped in a building with a crazy guy' movies and shows to date, what makes this standout and different to the others?

SouthWestSusie Samurai · 766 pts

Hi jlmarvelo,

As this is posted in the thriller category I will assume this is not a horror movie. Perhaps it is a suspense. ?I am not sure what the ticking bomb is that would make it a thriller or a suspense. What is keeping them trapped?

Good luck with this.

Cheers, SouthWestSusie

Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts

I agree with craig, because after reading your logline I still have no idea whether this is a horror movie (Like Friday the Thirteenth), or an action movie (Like Die Hard)

That will come from describing the bad guy, is he a serial killer a robber? a stressed out employee? Are they being held hostage? Are they just in the wrong place at the wrong time?

Here would be an example of a logline with more specifics:
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"When a crazed killer shuts down the power, a failed engineering student must rally his stoner friends to help him get the high rise elevators working to escape the madman"
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Of course yours would be different but as you can see in my example by describing the 'culprit' as a crazed killer, we now know what genre' the movie is.