This romantic, sci-fi action fantasy is set in a medieval world where war is common and survival is a daily struggle. The young heroine, Betha must persevere to overcome beasts, barbarians, ice Vikings, mythical creatures, elves and savages throughout the kingdom who all want her head.

5 reviews

dpg Singularity · 112,231 pts ★ Accepted

Is this for a feature film or a series?

Neer Shelter Singularity · 55,464 pts

Agreed with all the above.

I'll add that in most cases when you find yourself using many adjectives or genre descriptions in a logline, you know something is wrong.

Richiev Singularity · 82,714 pts

I think you need to tell us 'why' all these creatures want her head. What is so special about her, or what is so special about her mission/goal that everyone wants her dead?

What are they trying to stop?

Take this as an example: "When she discovers she's the descendant of the last dragon, a headstrong village girl must..." then tell us what her goal is and what she must do to achieve it.