Rewrite: When a muslim woman- betrothed as a child, follows her dream to choose her husband by herself, she must face terrorisation from her betrothed who feels dishonored.

by Benneth Logliner · 502 pts 366 views

2 reviews

Foxtrot25 Summitry · 17,380 pts

Benneth,

Sorry to say that I like the last version better.

1yzzy75 Penpusher · 166 pts

Terrorization? Is that really a word? Also, the dash is misplaced, it should be a comma. I love this idea, though. Keep going with it!