Benneth

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16 loglines
18 reviews

A depressed single mother must flee her country within two days or risk her two children taken by child services

June 20, 2022
When an abused blind orphaned boy discovers his magical powers, he struggles to stop a megalomeniac businessman with intent to obliterate his kingdom and his people.

June 19, 2022
In a semi-medieval city, an abused blind orphan boy with magical powers must stop a megalomeniac businessman before he obliterates his kingdom and his people.

June 19, 2022
A megalomaniac businessmann plots to overthrow the king, but only an abused poor blind orphaned boy can stop him

June 18, 2022
A bank manager invests 245 million dollars in an airport that does not exist, he must hunt down his scammers to save his bank from bankruptcy and going to jail.

June 30, 2020
When a young emigrant in arranged marriage, falls in love with a Norwegian Christian man, they must stop her dishonored betrothed, before he kills them both.

June 15, 2017
A rewrite: When a young Muslim emigrant woman finds love with a Norwegian man, her betrothed vows to stop them at all costs.

June 14, 2017
Another rewrite: When a young Muslim woman with dream for true love finds love outside her faith, her betrothed seeks to avenge his honor and the honor of his family.

June 13, 2017
Rewrite: When a muslim woman- betrothed as a child, follows her dream to choose her husband by herself, she must face terrorisation from her betrothed who feels dishonored.

June 13, 2017
A rewrite: When a young Muslim woman and a none Muslim man falls in love, they fight for their lives, when her betrothed hunts them to revenge his and his family’s honor.

June 12, 2017

on When an abused blind orphaned boy discovers his magical powers, he struggles to stop a megalomeniac businessman with intent to obliterate his kingdom and his people.

Thanks for your review. The fact is that the businessman wants to rule the kingdom. He brings a witch who placed a curse on the kingdom. The kingdom is hit by servere drought. The people become dissatisfied with the king.…
on A rewrite: When a young Muslim emigrant woman finds love with a Norwegian man, her betrothed vows to stop them at all costs.

Thanks to all of you i did a rewrite here: When she abandones her arranged marriage with a dream to find a man she love, a young emigrant in Norway must fight for her dream against her betrothed who is…
on A rewrite: When a young Muslim woman and a none Muslim man falls in love, they fight for their lives, when her betrothed hunts them to revenge his and his family’s honor.

Hei, this happens in present time in Norway. She falls in love with a Norwegian man. Should I have that in the logline? Tks
on When a young man converts to Islam for the love of a girl, he finds his life thrown into chaos when the mentor he befriended ends up being a terrorist, intent on bombing a train -with him omboard.

Just did a new rewrite.: "Determined to please his excommunicated Muslim fiancee, a young man converts to Islam, winds up with a ruthless terrorist as mentor and finds himself in a train with a bomb, he must disarm it before…
on When a young man converts to Islam for the love of a girl, he finds his life thrown into chaos when the mentor he befriended ends up being a terrorist, intent on bombing a train -with him omboard.

Thanks dpg for the research. What the MC is going to do is to offer his own life to save others. ?When he fails to get rid of the bomb or stop the train because of the panic in the…
on When a young man converts to Islam for the love of a girl, he finds his life thrown into chaos when the mentor he befriended ends up being a terrorist, intent on bombing a train -with him omboard.

Thanks dpg for taking time to do the research. What the protagonist will do is to save the lives of the passengers by offering his own life. When he fails to get rid of the bomb or stop the train…
on When a young man converts to Islam for the love of a girl, he finds his life thrown into chaos when the mentor he befriended ends up being a terrorist, intent on bombing a train -with him omboard.

The love part is in ACT 1. The conversion is the turning point which happens in ACT 2. The MC meets the Antagonist in ACT 2 but he does not realize that the antagonist is only planing to use him…
on A troubled young man converts to Islam to please his Muslim girlfriend, gets set up by a psychopathic terrorist in a train bomb attack, he must evacuate his frantic landsmen before a ticking time-bomb kills them.

Thanks again dpg. MC converted because he thought that it is what his girlfriend wanted. His girlfriend has been disowned by her family because of him(none Muslim). MC got into the line of a stray bullet. What I mean is…
on A troubled young man converts to Islam to please his Muslim girlfriend, gets set up by a psychopathic terrorist in a train bomb attack, he must evacuate his frantic landsmen before a ticking time-bomb kills them.

Thanks guys. I have done some rewrite and will appreciate a feedback. "When a naive young man converts to Islam for the love of a girl, he becomes a target in a terrorist conspiracy against his country, he has 30…
on A troubled young man converts to Islam to please his Muslim girlfriend, gets set up by a psychopathic terrorist in a train bomb attack, he must evacuate his frantic landsmen before a ticking time-bomb kills them.

Thanks dpg, I tried a different approach. "A naive young man converts to Islam for the love of a girl, winds up in the middle of a terror plot against his country."

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