PERTH GIRLS ARE EASY – When a space alien is chosen by his people to go to where the beautiful humans are (LA) and mate with one, he miscalculates and lands in remote Perth, Australia. Now armed only with pop culture references and bourgie lines like “I’m a producer”, he must find and convince a down to earth Aussie girl to have a baby with him or he’ll return home alone and be executed.

by Fma 1,607 pts

2 reviews

dpg 112,231 pts

Unfortunately, at 68 words in length this is more akin to an elevator pitch than a logline.

CraigDGriffiths 20,463 pts

Why don't you go back through comments on your previous posts and see what you can learn. What you are posting are too long and marketing, not loglines. You are getting free reviews so let's not abuse the friendship.