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Coo-ee!
Where screenwriters learn the form and logline their screen ideas.
Coo-ee!
I think your lines do not perfectly fit the structure of an intriguing logline. It's more like an opinion rather than a logline. There is no mention of any protagonist and his motive or any hint of the situation to create any curiosity.
Example: Boarded and tired of his routine job, a young software engineer accidentally discovers his true calling and embarks on an adventure of his lifetime.
Valentin says:
Maybe they?re two, but there is only one horse!
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Richiev Says:
Might be a good thing to add to the logline?
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"When their horse-driven wagon and three of their horses die in the middle of the outback, an Australian couple, with five children must decided who will live and who will die when it comes to riding their last horse back to civilization."
Or there are five and Craig and Shirley don't know which one to choose! You got it right, Valentin. COO-ee! is a story filled with humour ;-)
Maybe they're two, but there is only one horse!
:,,,No escape possible?except on horse back."
Well then, good thing they have a horse
Craig Landy, a tough outback bloke, and Shirley Marr, the 'other half', gave up all their possessions to travel the Bicentennial National Trail with a horse-driven gipsy wagon over a distance of more than 5000km through the Great Dividing Range - East Coast Australia. No escape possible...except on horse back.
A tough bloke and 'his other half', a strong minded self-sufficient woman, travel together 24/7 with a horse-driven gipsy wagon in hazardous circumstances through the Australian Outback. No escape possible...except on horse back.
Zal nog es een poging wagen, maar uit nieuwsgierigheid: Hoe zou je mijn eerste poging dan kunnen noemen? Het is een zin die letterlijk terugkomt in de film en die de gedachte van de twee hoofdpersonages weerspiegelt. Met deze zin heb ik ook reeds de eerste interesse kunnen wekken bij anderen in het eigenlijke verhaal...
If your dream is to walk to the northpole, you can walk to the northpole. In the story of COO-EE! .... ah ok, I'll try again...