Jaffer

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• on A corrupt, rural sheriff is pressured by his drug-lord bosses to protect their enterprise from the FBI while helping the feds search for an abducted girl.

  I can sense an interesting story and tension hidden in this logline. You need to reshuffle and restructure this logline at least 10 times and believe me it will be quite fun to the possibilities. My suggestion would be to…

• on People spend too much time living and working for the system and forget about themselves and their dreams. Follow Your Dreams!

  I think your lines do not perfectly fit the structure of an intriguing logline. It's more like an opinion rather than a logline. There is no mention of any protagonist and his motive or any hint of the situation to…