Update: When a night of UFO watching goes terribly wrong, a 12-year-old aspiring astronaut makes contact in a way she never expected. (SciFi/Family)

I am somewhat hooked because I would be interested in a story about a 12 year old aspiring astronaut, but 'goes horribly wrong' doesn't really tell me much about the inciting incident, and 'makes contact in a way she never expected' - is this about alien contact or something completely different? ?As you say it's Scifi/ family then I assume there will be aliens of some sort but I feel we need to know something of major importance happens, for the girl. ?eg 'she must bridge the gulf between earth dwellers and aliens' ? 'she is the only one who can prevent a catastrophic point of contact' ?'she must take a journey beyond her wildest dreams' ... I don't know but I expect her to be more that a bystander to a monumentous event, somewhat dependent on what went horribly wrong in the first place. ? ? I'm sure this could be a great story, and more than just a short.

I am somewhat hooked because I would be interested in a story about a 12 year old aspiring astronaut, but 'goes horribly wrong' doesn't really tell me much about the inciting incident, and 'makes contact in a way she never expected' - is this about alien contact or something completely different? ?As you say it's Scifi/ family then I assume there will be aliens of some sort but I feel we need to know something of major importance happens, for the girl. ?eg 'she must bridge the gulf between earth dwellers and aliens' ? 'she is the only one who can prevent a catastrophic point of contact' ?'she must take a journey beyond her wildest dreams' ... I don't know but I expect her to be more that a bystander to a monumentous event, somewhat dependent on what went horribly wrong in the first place. ? ? I'm sure this could be a great story, and more than just a short.