An unemployed biologic weapons scientist creates a love potion and then is chased by the FBI as an international terrorist.

Love Mix

5 reviews

Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

Thanks for your feedback.....He makes the potion after seeing his geeky friends
get rejected at a bar and invents a potion for everyone to buy to meet girls. Also the FBI agents following him think he is selling toxins to terrorists to get even for getting laid-off. The 2 agents a male & female hate each other and of course by the end they come in contact with potion.

genre - romance comedy no space to post it.

Former member

Thanks for your feedback.....He makes the potion after seeing his geeky friends
get rejected at a bar and invents a potion for everyone to buy to meet girls. Also the FBI agents following him think he is selling toxins to terrorists to get even for getting laid-off. The 2 agents a male & female hate each other and of course by the end they come in contact with potion.

genre - romance comedy no space to post it.

Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

uDawnWrite has raised a good question. What is the genre? It needs to be unequivocally clear.

And if there's a love potion, I'd expect a love story. If there is one, do include it in the logline.

Finally: surely the scientist has a specific goal with the love potion (uDawnWrite wanted to know the purpose of it, too). Once his name is cleared, what does our scientist want to achieve with it?

uDawnWrite 0 pts

I'm assuming this is a Romantic Comedy, or at least a Comedy. So is the love potion going to bring piece and harmony among bickering countries, and is that the reason why the FBI is after the Scientist? This is what I gather from the logline, which sounds very interesting.

SQM 0 pts

I love it!
It takes a moment for it to sink it, but then BAM! OMG! That is hilarious!