Losing their home and wearing out their welcome with friends, a married couple devise a plan to become temporary residents at a hotel

No Reservations

5 reviews

screen&writing 0 pts

Think about challenge ? for example: they want stay for free in those hotels. This is a conflict (they vs. staff) and driver for your plot.

Liam Farrell 0 pts

think "wearing out their welcome with friends" is unnecessary.

gman902105 0 pts

Change temporary to permanent (even if you know it's temporary) that may setup the conflict for your idea and the logline a bit easier. Also what richiev says works as well.