An ancient vampire re-awakens on a remote Irish island. An addicted American doctor must struggle with his own demons before confronting this evil.

Thanks for your comments, I really appreciate them.

Yeah really, i will prefer if you can just make this into one sentence. You can still do that. In this case try to slip in a link between the American doctor and the vampire, probably the vampire is a long lost friend, a relative or co-worker, something that will strike an ironical or emotional chord and challenge the doctor. The first sentence is okay, i guess you should keep that, but then the link is also important in piecing the sentence together.

As above, what's the connection between the addiction and the vamp - specfically, why does it make the doctor the best *and the worst* person to tackle the vamp? Yeah, I get the drug addiction = blood addiction thing, but you could make it more explicit and exciting in the logline?

I aslo worry that there's nothing new and eye-catching about it. Boiled to its essence, it seems to be "yet another guy fights yet another vamp. Only in Ireland this time." I know that sounds harsh, but - what are we going to see in this vamp movie that we've never seen before? Why should someone make your vamp movie and not any of the dozen others circulating round Hollywood?