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A woman must escape a murderous android that is experimenting on humans to try and make them immortal to combat its own loneliness.

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t3xx3r 422 pts

What kind of android is it?? Does it have special abilities?? Knowledge?? Taught something on how to experiment?? Was it rogue or a government-approved android that was uploaded AI software that went haywire?? Just some ideas.

TullyArcher Samurai · 1,313 pts

I like the android character, but you need to tell us more. Why this woman?

variable 18,541 pts

Supercool!

Maybe add in an inciting incident,
"After waking up in an abandoned factory site..."

Both the characters have such primitive dramatic needs that I'm blown away...