t3xx3r
422 points
- 16 loglines
- 6 reviews
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a retired black ops federal agent?I'd have to stop you there.? A federal agent is more synonymous with "FBI".? A black ops is either military, paramilitary, or not related to the CIA.? Usually the CIA has a more defined structure…
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This logline screams part of "Timeless". However, what is it about the terminated project that's important to her?? What is significant about the loss of marriage?? What is causing the timeline to slip that she had to go back and…
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I agree with the others.? I cannot find the protagonist, and even if Mother was one, it's a flimsy one.? To conquer and destroy Earth to remake it in her own idealized version is one thing, but I don't see…
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I had a minor confusion in the beginning.? You placed a comma after herself, hence the confusion.? Here's what I'd do. When she breaks the law and names herself a free spirited cog, she fights against the local diversity officer…
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What kind of android is it?? Does it have special abilities?? Knowledge?? Taught something on how to experiment?? Was it rogue or a government-approved android that was uploaded AI software that went haywire?? Just some ideas. -
Nice logline but got several questions. 1.? What makes Adar special?? Any special attributes to identify him? 2.? What can he do to find those chameleon killers?? How can he see them? 3.? What is important about dishonor?? Maybe refer…