When she discovers a clue to NASA’s plan to escape Earth for a new world years before disaster and war ravaged the planet, a scavenger must use what she’s collected to find the mythical “last rocket” to escape our world and launch a new beginning for mankind.

by Knightrider Mentor · 5,041 pts 686 views

When she spots a wormhole that’ll pass between the Earth and the Moon within a week, a scavenger, with an enthusiasm for NASA’s golden years, must use what she’s collected to find the mythical last rocket ever built to escape our ravaged world and launch a new beginning for mankind.

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RussellN Samurai · 1,083 pts

Aha. so how about this:

In a post-apocalyptic future, an impending wormhole entices a nostalgic scavenger to find the mythical rocket created?to exorcise it so she can ?launch a new beginning for mankind.

RussellN Samurai · 1,083 pts

I'm seeing a post-apocalyptic Earth, and a hunt for glory/renewal. ?How's this as a rephrasing/trimming:

An impending?wormhole entices?a nostalgic scavenger to ?find the mythical "last rocket ever built" so she can? launch a new beginning for mankind.

CraigDGriffiths Singularity · 20,463 pts

I see two tales, which is the main one. I use one story to tell a second. But that is in the script not a logline. I am left with a few questions.

Fly to where to escape what. If I knew this I'd know the story.

Perhaps the wormhole is a major thing, but feel like unnecessary detail in this version.

Can you expand a bit?