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Agreed with csantan2, the logline lacks a clear goal. It could be that he wants to survive but it's not clear what specifically is threatening him.
Otherwise, this vaguely describes a situation, not a plot. Best to redraft this one so it specifies an inciting incident and causally connected goal.
What's the character's goal?
You are telling us what they did, not what we can see them do if we go on the story of your film.