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A PBM was a plane/boat that could bomb -- used in WWII and afterwards.
I probably wouldn't use the word "dark" twice.
What is a PBM?
And what exactly are the dark sinister forces that makes the brothers bitter enemies?
And what becomes their objective goal as a result? ? What's the plot? ?It's not enough to set up a dramatic situation; a logline must also lay out a plot the follows as a result of the dramatic situation.