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>>> could be about 85 words.
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FWIW: I?ve never read a logline longer than 40 words. And I?ve studied over a 1,000.? A long logline defeats the whole purpose of a logline, which is to succinctly state what the script is about to busy, multi-tasking movie makers suffering from industry induced ADD, attention deficit disorder.? Their attention span is measured in seconds, not minutes.
Who is the lead character?
What do they want?
What is standing in their way?
At 81 words, this is way too long to be a logline.? It's more like a? story pitch.
Please study the guidelines under "Our formula" at the top of the page for guidelines on writing an industry acceptable logline.