Driven by his father's envy and murderous past, a Viking prince is pursued by jealous gods and a dark temptress in his quest for redemption.

Why does the prince need redemption? The logline says his dad is the one with a murderous past, not the prince. The protagonist comes across as the undeserving victim (father's envy and murderous past), not the offender.

The prince seems to be more in need of rescuing than redemption.

Thanks, you made my day. Screenplay is based on the Norse sagas. Do you want to read it?
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Redemption from his fathers envy and disapproval, wording could be better. thanks.