Determined to experience the wildest paradise on the island of Tasmania, one will do anything to find a way.

Thank you so much guys! Will fix that up!

What can i add to these comments? All true. Also, I don't have a sense if this is an action, rom com, or a spiritual awakening, or what. I mean it could be a nature paradise, spiritual paradise. What are we talking about when we say paradise? And why does it have to be Tassie? Is it some unique feature of the island? Flora, fauna, people? It sounds potentially very interesting, but it's not a logline at the moment. Good luck with the revision.

Hi Isabelle, thank you for joining the party!

Have a quick read of the logline-writing guidelines on this site. It will help you come up with a good basic structure for your story logline.

Happy writing!