Can?t find it, can?t fix it, he?s a cop, now he has to fix or he?s done so taking on an unsolved murder, not well-suited for, but it?s tied to his solution only he?s not prepared to face or overcome the haunting truth about himself or her.

by CaptainMayI19pp Logliner · 401 pts 425 views

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Neer Shelter Singularity · 55,464 pts

The primary function of a logline is to describe a plot - actions taken towards a goal. The above describes a character but not actions and goals.

Check out the 'Formula' tab on the top bar for more details about logline conventions.

Foxtrot25 Summitry · 17,380 pts

Sorry, but this is not a logline even if read by Yoda on Dagobah.