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What the logline needs is more clarity and specificity. What is the (inciting) incident that gives the cop a chance to redeem himself? And what is the concrete, specific action he takes to remove the blemish on his record?
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What the logline needs is more clarity and specificity. What is the (inciting) incident that gives the cop a chance to redeem himself? And what is the concrete, specific action he takes to remove the blemish on his record?