Begore the summer vacation a girl was murdered After being inherited and the investigator and her friends are trying to find the murderer and they are hampered by what they have avoided every summer But it has already begun

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Emma6767 Penpusher · 111 pts

In the summer vacation friends surprise that their Normal life has ruined and what they avoided every summer has already begun after murdering their friend by unknown and they and the investigator are trying to know the killer.

I can't edit it is that okay?

dpg Singularity · 112,231 pts

>>>was murdered After being inherited

Please clarify.? What does it mean that she "was inherited"?

>>>what they have avoided every summer

What have they avoided?

>>But it has already begun

What has already begun?

The logline needs to clearly state what the dramatic threat is.? And it needs to specify the objective goal.