Approaching middle age and divorced; a British IT professional needs more fun injecting into his life. After moving to Bangkok and working as a teacher, he faces an overdose of funny situations.

The first sentence can be cut from the logline - it's back story and is not relevant to the plot.

Then, as mentioned above, describe the inciting incident that motivates him to move. Secondly, and most importantly, what is his specific goal? What MUST he achieve in his move? If it's more fun, then describe what that means in practical terms.

Lastly, best to avoid vague description such as "...overdose of funny situations?". Unless you describe the details of the plot, you're asking the reader to come up with them for you - the point of a logline is for you to inform the reader not the other way around.

A logline should be as clear and concise as you can possible get it. Take Richiev's advice and also try to merge the sentences into one about 20-30 words and clearly tell your story.

A logline should be as clear and concise as you can possible get it. Take Richiev's advice and also try to merge the sentences into one about 20-30 words and clearly tell your story.