A chef discovers that her husband is in an affair with one of her co-workers.

Doro Wat (ዶሮ ዋት)

3 reviews

almostfilmmaker Penpusher · 24 pts

hey, I liked the logline and I wanted to ask if you ever wrote this into a script?

IvyEight6 Penpusher · 54 pts

1) She's a head chef.
2) She's from Ethiopia.
3) He's good at baking.
4) He's not famous.

markferland Penpusher · 28 pts

I'm not one with a lot of experience, but I have spent the last four months hammering out hundreds of loglines using multiple logline formats for a screenplay I'm working on, so I've picked up on a few things.
It seem you should make your protagonist a little more exotic to make them more attractive to delve into. What kind of chef, where is she from, what is his expertise, or is he famous? i.e. (a recently married French chef has just opened her first restaurant and)...discovers that her husband is "having' an affair with one of her co-workers.
Just an idea. Hope that helps!