An divorced actor decides to reconnect with his daughter after she becomes famous in her own right.

After Fame

4 reviews

IvyEight6 54 pts

She wants to be one like her dad who was both an multitalented actor and musician.

IvyEight6 54 pts

1) He abandoned her and left her with her mother.
2) For her money.
3) He wants to.

BenGilani Logliner · 360 pts

Hi IvyEight6,
I think you need to provide a little more context. Like:
1- Why was the actor disconnected from his daughter in the first place?
2- Why does he want to reconnect now?
3- Does he want to reconnect particularly because she is becoming famous, too?

These are the things that create an interest in reading your script.
I hope this helps.