After witnessing her boyfriends set up in a drug heist gone wrong a naive gangland girlfriend must unravel the truth behind what went down if she's going to get either of them out alive.
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If she witnessed it, what's to unravel? Sounds like she'd know exactly what happened. Get them out of where? Prison? Are they not criminals? If so, they probably belong there; if not, what were they doing involved in a drug heist?
A gang member actively working to get multiple criminal boyfriends free of whatever punishment they're enduring sounds like a bit of a stretch in regards to creating a sympathetic protagonist?especially if she's naive; how would she have survived to this point? Not only is the logline unclear, but the strength of the entire story is in question.
Lol, One missing apostrophe can blow up and entire sentence.
(I just figured it was a typo but now that you mention it, your right, the girl has two boyfriends)
The logline seems a bit confusing. "After witnessing her boyfriends set up in a drug heist gone wrong..." So this girl has multiple boyfriends? Or is it her boyfriend's set up in the drug heist (like the boyfriend is actually an undercover police officer? Might want to try and rephrase this. Keep working on it :)