After undergoing an experiment for which a victim?s memory is implanted to him, a serial killer sentenced to death has 24 hours before he suffers irreversible brain damage to find another serial killer and obtain his pardon.

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deborah_b Samurai · 796 pts

I'm intrigued. I thought of Escape from New York. :)

I wondered why you needed a serial killer to do this job? He has the victim's memories, but his other skills seem to be: killing. Wouldn't you be better off using an FBI profiler or an ex-cop or a private eye? Someone skilled in tracking killers. That might also address the first comment, above, about deserving what's coming to him.

I know Escape from New York used the idea of 'you get a pardon' AND 'you get to live once we neutralise this deadly thing we've implanted in your neck' -- and it worked. But I did wonder whether the threat of death itself was enough. Like: 'find the killer and we'll let you live' doesn't need to also come with a pardon. Which makes it even easier to use one of the jobs I listed in the paragraph above. Just a thought!

Trix Mentor · 2,991 pts

I agree with variable. ?Who cares? ?Let him fry! LOL. Also:

  • Why only 24 hours? ?Realistically he wouldn't be able to achieve that.
  • What links the two serial killers? ?Is this a Hannibal Lecter scenario? ?Do they have the same MO?
  • If this is an experiment, would they immediately set him an objective? ?Wouldn't they run tests and establish protocols? ?I'd remove the 'experiment' element - A death row serial killer has the memories of another killer's victim (or victims?) implanted...
  • Do you need the 'irreversible brain damage' element? ?If a pardon is his reward, then failure means he'll be killed anyway. ?Two threats of the same thing.

Regards
Trix

variable Summitry · 18,541 pts

You'll need to provide solid grounds to make us root for him, because otherwise, as a serial killer, he deserves what's coming to him