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Logliner · 348 points

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After being accidentally injected with an experimental hyper adrenaline drug, a skinny, shy and dull-life man must learn how to use his newly ultra-energized body to escape from a secret government organization which is on the hunt for him.

February 16, 2022
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After being transplanted with the arm of a recently executed bandit, a shy and coward farmer must learn how to control his new body part and overcome his cowardice when a violent gang led by the bandit’s vicious brother threaten the town and the woman he loves.

June 25, 2020
After killing its progeny as part of an initiation hunting family ritual, a man and his teenage son must protect themselves from a horrid beast that hunts in the dark and feeds upon human skin.

April 6, 2020
After undergoing an experiment for which a victim?s memory is implanted to him, a serial killer sentenced to death has 24 hours before he suffers irreversible brain damage to find another serial killer and obtain his pardon.

March 2, 2020
A woman who has just escaped from her abusive husband and moved to an old apartment must defend her autistic child from an evil entity which he accidentally released after befriending the neighbor, a mysterious old man who claims to be a renowned magician.

March 12, 2019
After being accidentally locked up in their classroom due to a failed mischief, a group of teens must fight for their lives when they discover that their teachers are aliens who feed on the brains of children.

March 12, 2019
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A woman who seduces and drugs men to steal from them must fight for her life after framing a man with a bizarre sleep condition by which a gate to hell is opened every time he sleeps.

March 12, 2019
After his son confesses a murder to him, an obsessively upright police officer on the brink of a once in a lifetime promotion must use all his power and skills to destroy all evidence before the truth is uncovered.

February 4, 2017
While trying to aid a quadriplegic man with an alternative method, a blind music therapist accidentally materializes an unholy spirit from her patient?s troubled mind, and it?s up to them to fight against it.

February 4, 2017

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on After being transplanted with the arm of a recently executed bandit, a shy and coward farmer must learn how to control his new body part and overcome his cowardice when a violent gang led by the bandit’s vicious brother threaten the town and the woman he loves.

A small Western town circa 1880's/1890's. Actually, it's an action comedy with a steampunk weird western comic or pulp magazine feel, as 'Jonah Hex' or 'Wild Wild West'.
on After being transplanted with the arm of a recently executed bandit, a shy and coward farmer must learn how to control his new body part and overcome his cowardice when a violent gang led by the bandit’s vicious brother threaten the town and the woman he loves.

It's a struggle. His body is adapting to his new arm and viceversa. The arm is trying to gain control of the rest of his body, such as in 'Orlac's Hands' - the German expressionist classic - and 'Body Parts'…
on After being transplanted with the arm of a recently executed bandit, a shy and coward farmer must learn how to control his new body part and overcome his cowardice when a violent gang led by the bandit’s vicious brother threaten the town and the woman he loves.

Haha! I like it. The working title so far I've managed to come up with is 'Armed' - I know, it's not so creative but I'm a bit weak at titles.
on After killing its progeny as part of an initiation hunting family ritual, a man and his teenage son must protect themselves from a horrid beast that hunts in the dark and feeds upon human skin.

Thank you both for your reviews. The main character is the teenager - at least the film is told on his point of view. I had the same dilemma about the beginning of the logline. That's why I chose the…
on When his former lover is killed, an immortal cowboy rises from the dead teams up with a teenage girl to kill those are responsible.

If he's immortal maybe he's facing a gang of outlaw ghost bandits? Like someone said above, being immortal leaves him with no adversaries. Unless they are immortal too. Also, what about the teenage girl he teams up with? Why she…
on When his family is terrorised by the ghost of a killer, a man sets out to confront the ghost, an old foe, bent on avenging his death.

I like this one. Reminds me of 'Cape Fear' but with a ghost twist. Also 'Shocker', that Wes Craven's 80's B-movie about a serial killer's spirit using electric power to kill. I imagine being a ghost gives the killer a…
on While in coma, a pessimistic former athlete must regain his self belief to help a police force, that operates within collective unconscious of humanity, stop a powerful psychic taking over everybody’s minds.

Hi Knightrider. I see lots of references to 'Carrie', 'The Fury', 'Dreamspace' and 'Inception' here. I agree with Nicholas that it is confusing. I really like the concept of someone in coma helping the police, but I don't see why…
on After witnessing a UFO crash landing, a precocious silver miner’s daughter tries to make sense of her place in the universe. Too bad, she?s brought the alien home with her.

Hi Eljohn. I get a sense of scifi dramedy here. I think it's an original twist to the traditional story of a single woman dealing with raising a child. However, the logline is a bit fuzzy. Making sense of her…
on After his son confesses a murder to him, an obsessively upright police officer on the brink of a once in a lifetime promotion must use all his power and skills to destroy all evidence before the truth is uncovered.

Thank you all for the feedback. As Nir and dpg said, this is a contradictory character who has to choose between the written law and the family law. But I think that my approch on the story is wrong. I…
on While trying to aid a quadriplegic man with an alternative method, a blind music therapist accidentally materializes an unholy spirit from her patient?s troubled mind, and it?s up to them to fight against it.

Thanks a lot for the feedback. It means a lot to me and it's really helpful. The issue about the characteristics of the demon is a dilemma I have as far as how it is presented. My idea is that…
on A victim of inner turmoil, twenty-year-old Stephanie disastrously endeavors to reclaim her joy and happiness.

Hi Gerald. I'm curious about what happened to her that caused her inner turmoil. I'm guessing it's a traumatic situation... or maybe not. It's not clear. Also, you can find joy and happiness in a wide variety of things. For…
on After her employers die in a city wide pandemic an Upper West Side nanny must navigate the violent streets to save their young son and put him on the last boat to safety.

Hi hannibalchew. I agree with those above that mention the fact that saving a boy who's not her son is not much of a convincing motivation. In my opinion, her goal should be to save her son after she witnesses…