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Meaning to investigate: how can it be stepped up one in the logline? Character quirk? strange circumstances?, ... I smell, this can be upgraded from a show people like to one they love and come back for conventions years later.
Oh, and unless the way she gets her cases is crucial for the story, I?d completely ditch ?that are thrown at her? no new info, nips on your word count.
I think this logline lacks details. It would be more powerful if we knew exactly what kind of tough case she is dealing with, and what specifically is causing the strain on her relationship.? Ideally, it would be great if these two things were also related.