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When a portal opens up for demons to escape Hell, the devil?s son must go to earth to round up the demons and deliver the one who made the portal to Yahweh before He cleans up the mess, sending every demon and creature into oblivion along with the son, if he?s still on earth.
I feel like this is going have a weird 'Supernatural' type story, but hopefully, since I'm telling from a different perspective with the Devil's son as the main character, I can make the story go where I want it to.…
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During an arrest on a train, the leader must lead his team through the full speed train filled with flesh eating demons to the engine car, where they must find a way to get off the train before it crashes.
Let's try this again. I'm getting close. I can feel it.
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After getting injected with a rage serum, the injected man must use his new found abilities to stop a rich vengeful businessman from flooding the streets with his serum to destroy the city.
I'm kinda riding this one close to the vest. It's still in writing mode, but this is round one of a previous one. The motivational speaker stopping the businessman from previous logline. I took a new turn on it to…
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In order to save two missing girls, a cop must win a game of wits with the criminal who knows where they are or risk losing the girls to a dark demise. (Psychological Horror)
This is nowhere near my best work. Wow.
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After a fight with a pack of wolves, a emotionally volatile tachycardic is given superhuman senses, which places him and his girlfriend in danger from an unstoppable tyrannical businessman. (Revision 2)
This one is prepped and ready for work. I need the logline to be perfected before I can get it out there. All reviews are helpful. Thank you.
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Two down and out cops are paired as partners to take on a cartel before the cartel spreads a powerful drug that could destroy the city or risk being fired, if they survive.
This was by the seat of my pants as I wrote it. I'm still looking for the Logline used to create The Other Guys. If anyone knows where I can find it, that would be awesome. Thanks a bunch.
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A young impressionable man is called by a manipulative enchantress to rule a kingdom until he finds out how the previous ruler died and investigates everyone, thinking how he might be next and what it would mean for the kingdom if he dies.
This one is kind of wordy in my opinion. Help on consolidating it, please.
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Several years after losing his team in a mission gone wrong, a top grade elite sniper is recruited back to train a team of rising soldiers to stop a group of elite forces trying to kill a foreign politician.
I switched it to a foreign politician. It could be anything of your choosing and? I hope it makes it better and spot on. Thank you for your reviews. I need to be on here more often. Sorry for the…
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A strong teenage girl begins training at a unique academy to fight the Gods who are trying to kill her family and her.
This needs work. Like for sure. But I'm getting there. I think I know what I want this one to be.
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A man looks for how his brother died, only to find it in the deadliest game known to man, a deadly version of soccer, which he plans to win become unstable when he finds the truth about his brother.
(I revised)
I feel like I'm missing the cause and effect. Cause: He's looking for how his brother died. Effect: He gets caught up in the same game that killed his brother. I think I just created two causes and no effect.
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After being discharged for unauthorized actions, the wolf soldier works as a security guard for a rich CEO until he is ordered to take down a terrorist group in his hometown hellbent on destroying the Queen.
I felt like I left something out of this one. The stakes are destroying the queen to incite anarchy, but I felt that part was irrelevant.
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After Mankind’s potential for good, The Son of the Devil, in defiance of his father, arrives in Los Angeles to send the supernatural creatures back to hell before they take over the city and find the hole in the Gateway before they take over the world.
This new one is a little more wordy, but I'm hoping to cut it down as I figure out what I want the logline to truly be. I hope this is better than the original.
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A hunter/slayer hybrid woman takes on the world’s monster in her normal life Seattle, which changes when she meets a sorcerer who is cursed to live in the shadows.
wonderful reviews, everyone. Awesome as always, but again, just a test drive. this is more like a scribble.
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A hunter/slayer hybrid woman takes on the world’s monster in her normal life Seattle, which changes when she meets a sorcerer who is cursed to live in the shadows.
This is actually a test drive on a few things I'm trying to work on. So this is not a logline. It's a test drive. I'm trying to figure a few things like how to delete logline and adjust them.
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When an archaeologist is killed by a god, a student in mythology finds out and goes on the journey to find the weapon that can kill gods, a grotesque monster made back by a medieval monastery father.
Well, I wanted it monster vs monster/god. I guess I should have logged it under SCI-FI rather than Action.
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After a dancer loses her competition, she turns to a skilled street fighter to up her game for the upcoming competition.
Valentin, I wasn't referring to a computer nerd. A hand to hand combatant is more where this logline was leading. Street fighter, mma fighter, it was essentially the same idea or lead of possibilities. As to how the dancer lost…
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When an archaeologist is killed by a god, a student in mythology finds out and goes on the journey to find the weapon that can kill gods, a grotesque monster made back by a medieval monastery father.
Since all the names I come up with? are either hard to pronounce or complicated. I can't name them, but I guess it would be easier to state which god they died by rather than the names. It still gives…
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After being arrested for having dangerous future technology, the prison unleashes a hyper aggressive android, loyal to him, upon the police station in an attempt to escape.
Well, I'm trying to write a story where the villain wins. Thought that might be a new kind of twist in imagination. See where it leads.
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After a dancer loses her competition, she turns to a skilled street fighter to up her game for the upcoming competition.
This is a remake of one the other log lines I wrote. When I used the word "game", You can use performance or game for the competition. I just this one is better than the last one.
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When the mentor of ruthless assassin/lone wolf cop is murdered, the assassin/cop bands his team of skilled corrupt cops/best friends together to find the one responsible.
People are right about it being wordy. I just didn't know how to put it down the way I wanted, but this is just a rough draft anyway, so I came up with a better one. After an assassin mentor…
