After killing its progeny as part of an initiation hunting family ritual, a man and his teenage son must protect themselves from a horrid beast that hunts in the dark and feeds upon human skin.

4 reviews

guswakey Logliner · 461 pts

With regards to the beast hunting only at night- are the father and son stuck somewhere they can't easily get away from, or can the night time have more of a significance? I'm thinking of Quiet Place, Birdbox and It Comes at Night as examples of stories where the enemy attacks happen at a certain time or for a certain reason and the characters have to work around that in order to survive.

JM Logliner · 348 pts

Thank you both for your reviews.

The main character is the teenager - at least the film is told on his point of view.

I had the same dilemma about the beginning of the logline. That's why I chose the words "its", as it is referring to the beast. But I guess I'll go with a beginning as suggested by Richiev. It's more straightforward.

Neer Shelter Singularity · 55,464 pts

Agreed with Richiev.

Also, who is the main character father or son?