5 reviews
You need a different lead character.
The lead character should be a friend who had nothing to do with the "Prank"
However the lead, the prankster and a bunch of teens are in the house (A party maybe) an the killer guts them one by one whether guilty or innocent.
Now it's up to the lead character to stop the deranged homeless man.
Hope that helped, good luck with this
I like the idea of the hook and home invasion but why would we root for the pranked to survive if he just smacked a homeless person for views on the Internet? I fail to see why this protagonist is sympathetic.
I like the idea of the hook and home invasion but why would we root for the pranked to survive if he just smacked a homeless person for views on the Internet? I fail to see why this protagonist is sympathetic.