After giving a tape showing a ritual killing to a deputy. Both the tape and the deputy go missing. When he finds more tapes he needs to get them to the police and survive attacks from unknown individuals. PS: small town, he thinks the cops are involved.

Home Movie

8 reviews

Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

Everyone has made the points I could -- make it flow better, get it down to an appropriate length etc. etc.

I want to give you a positive: The title works for me because it conjures the image of the kids cartoon but your logline isn't at all. Great irony, nice work.

Karel Segers Mentor · 5,093 pts

Everyone has made the points I could -- make it flow better, get it down to an appropriate length etc. etc.

I want to give you a positive: The title works for me because it conjures the image of the kids cartoon but your logline isn't at all. Great irony, nice work.

Neer Shelter Singularity · 55,464 pts

The logline is a bit long and some what unclear.

However from your responses to the others I got more details and clarity.
Perhaps:
After he uncovers a police coverup over of a series of murders, a renovator must protect the evidence he's got from the local police department and deliver it safely to the federal authorities.