After being permanently transformed into a penguin during an operation, a disgraced MI6 agent is offered redemption to spy on a villainous family by acting as their daughter’s newest adorable pet.

2 reviews

Odie Samurai · 2,208 pts

I dig the idea of the penguin being the daughter's new pet.
Focusing on the front-end, how does a disgraced 007 get transformed into a penguin?
EX: “When a bungled mission transforms him into a penguin, a disgraced MI6 agent…”
Opinion: Can “permanent” be removed? Meaning, can this villainous family have the antidote to turn him back into a dad/agent?

Take care.

SSalvatore Logliner · 686 pts

Love it. I actually laughed out loud.

I think you could tighten it up on the back-end. Flesh out the villainous family. Maybe they are crime lords / drug dealers who use animal rights activism (or the world's largest online pet store) as a front. Tie the villains to some seemingly legitimate use of animals.

Maybe their "villainous" streak is that they own a fishing fleet that uses driftnet fishing and actually kills mass numbers of penguins in their fishing boats' nets.