After an organic supercomputer goes haywire and hijacks all of the world?s computer systems, its scientist creator must stop the crazed machine before it kills him.

A screenplay I’m currently working on.

7 reviews

Maidenscombe 0 pts

Will the supercomputer only kill its creator? As that is what it sounds like.

Apart from the word organic, it sounds similar to Terminator. Without altering the script itself, could the logline be rewritten to make it sound brand new?

Ilandes 0 pts

I don't know if it's necessary to say 'scientist creator', since the creator is obviously the creator of the computer system...
My own opinion if I was reading the back of a video though and trying to decide whether or not to get it, is if the world or some big disaster was at risk, not just the life of the person who created this mess ;). My two cents anyway but it does sound like an interesting premise.

Former member Penpusher · 20 pts

I like the log line and see how it would be suspenseful, but I'm not sure what an organic computer is?